THE GHOUL WHO WAS THWARTED
(Revised by BoSt 2025)
In ancient
times in Northern lands, there was a brilliant, tall, stout, handsome, long
shoulder length blond haired, blue eyed, young man called Endre Bjorn who had successfully
passed the State military examination in Capital, and had been ordered to go,
by a specific date, to report for duty at frontier Telon Province.
As it was
the rainy season, he was dressed appropriately with his belongings wrapped in
waterproof skins and loaded on horseback. Following the main highways, he rode
and whenever possible, galloped with eagerness to reach his destination in
time.
On this day
the weather had not been particularly cooperative. Gusting winds and sudden
downpours hindered his progress all along the way. Dusk was fast approaching,
and he was nowhere near a town or an inn where he could pass the night in
relative, dry comfort.
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01- ENDRE BJORN |
The buildup of ominous clouds above persuaded him to veer off onto a side road leading to a small village nestled in the woods. He needed to seek (shelter) immediate accommodations before darkness blanketed the earth. He spotted a peasant, returning from the fields at the end of the day’s work loaded with fresh fodder for the animals and inquired as to a possible night’s lodging.
The peasant
shook his head, “It’s not that we are inhospitable, but there are only
impoverished families in this village. You are certain not to find any room in
any of the huts.” Then in conciliatory
mood he directed the stranger to an old, dilapidated Temple still standing just
outside of the village. At least there he could spend the night somewhat
sheltered from the harsh elements.
Endre Bjorn
thanked the peasant and rode away. He
eventually came upon the badly neglected structure, half buried in vines,
runners and rampant vegetation. With some difficulty he pushed open the
creaking door and stepped in. At once his lungs were assailed by a musky smell
and dust lay inches high everywhere. Thick cobwebs hid most of the surfaces. In
the niches he saw barely visible statues of gods so decayed through years of
neglect that he could not distinguish one from the other.
The suffocating air forced Endre to go outside. He gasped and gasped then looked about him when he could breathe bit more easily. As night cloaked the premises he fetched a candle from his bundle and lit it. Going around the main temple structure he came upon a portion of the second story that was precariously attached, barely hanging on to the main structure. Following the trellises off to the side he found a protected alcove under an old flight of stone steps that ended abruptly, going nowhere.
“This will
do for the night.” He grumbled under his breath then, fetching his knapsack,
spread it out under the stone steps. He tied his horse to an old tree and
placed some fodder before him. Next he took his flask from the saddle and wet
his dry throat. He leaned back and began washing down some dry rations to
satiate his sudden grumbling tummy. The rains came and went until the dark sky
cleared of the ominous clouds which were replaced with scattered puffs that
parted periodically to let the waning new moon peep through.
Endre Bjorn,
rather exhausted from travel, had just closed his eyes in sleep when a rustling
sound in the temple startled him awake. What’s more, a sudden icy breeze swept
over his face making him shudder involuntarily.
The
moonlight just then revealed a chalk-faced woman dressed in a dirty old style,
long white gown coming out of the temple. She stole past quietly as though she
were afraid of being seen.
Endre quickly swallowed his fear. Lying perfectly still he pretended to be asleep and covertly watched her with half-closed eyes. Curiously, the woman drew a rope from her sleeve and looked at it for a time before instantly vanishing into thin air. This confirmed she was an apparition, most likely a ghost of one who had hung herself. He got up quietly and traced her steps.
Sure enough,
she went into the village and when she came to a certain house she slipped into
the courtyard through a crack in the door.
As he was keen to find out her reason for haunting this premise, Endre
abandoned propriety and leapt over the wall after her. Standing before him was
a modest three roomed house. Crossing the rather empty courtyard, he reached
the rear room where a lamp was burning dimly. Endre looked through the window
into the room, and there he spotted a young woman of about twenty sitting on
the bed, sighing deeply. Her kerchief however was soaked through with tears.
Beside her in a crib lay a little child fast asleep.
The woman
repeatedly looked up toward the beam of the ceiling. She appeared in great
dismay, one moment she would weep and the next she would gently, lovingly,
stroke the child. Endre, following her gaze positioned himself so as to see
more clearly the object of her attention.
His eyes avidly searched the high ceiling and finally he spotted the
dark apparition dressed in white, sitting up on the beam. Momentarily she
glowed. He could see clearly now as she, with an eerie smile, passed the rope
around her neck and then, eyes bulging, tongue sticking out, she mimicked being
hanged. Egging on the poor woman on, the
ghost hissed with hostility one moment then in the next beckoned alluringly
with a hand gesture.
Each time
the young woman looked up as though drawn by an irresistible command, remained
focused as if mesmerized, then snapped out of her reverie only when the child
wiggled or gurgled. This went on for
some time.
Unexpectedly the young woman in a resolute voice addressed the Ghost: "You say it would be best for me to die. Very well, then, I will die; but oh, I cannot bear to part with my baby!" Once more cupping her face, she burst into heart-wrenching tears, but the heartless ghost merely scoffed and threatened her. In an undecipherable communication the apparition next reached out softly in order to coax her.
When the
exhausted young woman finally yielded to all that pressure and in resignation
declared: "Enough, do not torture me any more… I’ll do as you wish, I will
die. Just leave my baby in peace."
Endre for a
time was lost for what to do. He could make noise or force his way in to stop
or at least impede the evil apparition’s aim. The very real consequence of
being chastised for impropriety or charged as trespasser however, made him
hesitate.
“But can I
just stand by and do nothing?” As he
struggled to find the right course of action, the young woman meanwhile had
gone over to her chest of clothes, put on new garments, and painted her face
before the mirror. Then she drew up a bench and climbed up on it. She undid her
girdle and knotted it to the beam. She had already stretched forth her neck and
was about to tie the other end around her neck when the child suddenly awoke
and began to cry.
To Endre’s
relief, the woman aborted the suicide, climbed down and, taking the baby to her
bosom, stroked the infant's head and chest as she rocked her body slowly back
and forth. Tears streamed from her eyes like a string of pearls and fell onto
her child. She wept and wept.
The irate ghost meanwhile heartlessly growled and hissed at this delay. She was so close to reaching her objective. She had haunted this young woman for many months wearing away her resolve. In a short while the child had again fallen asleep, and the woman once more began to look aloft. Then she rose, again climbed on the bench, and was about to lay the noose about her neck when Endre, risking all, began to call out loudly and drum on the windowpane to stop her. Then, with one hard punch, he broke through the pane and climbed into the room. The shocked and frightened woman fell to the ground unconscious while the ghost vanished into thin air.
Fortunately
for him there was no other about. Endre picked up the unconscious woman and
gently laid her on her bed. Then gently slapped her cheeks tried to bring her
around. As she was about to regain
consciousness, he drew away to a distance, intent on leaving. Suddenly however,
something hanging down from the beam, like a cord without an end caught his
eye. Knowing that it belonged to the ghost of the hanged woman he reached for
it and tugged at it. Wrapping it into a coil he placed it in his inner
pocket.
By this time
the young woman had gained her full faculties. She trembled with fright at the
perceived danger from an intruder.
Endre Bjorn
with a placating smile and in a soothing voice tried to reassure the young
woman: "Forgive this intrusion. I mean you no harm, but I could not just
simply stand by and have you throw your life away. Your child needs you to take good care of
him! You have but one life to lose in this world!" Convinced that she was now calmer, he left
her and went outside.
His
thoughts, nevertheless, turning to the vindictive ghost and expecting
retaliatory trouble from her, he headed straight for the Temple where he had left
his sword right by his baggage.
He never
made it to the Temple however, as halfway there, he encountered the angry ghost
looking even more menacing, waiting for him in centre of the road.
Barring his
way, the ghost growled: “You have interrupted my plans and have thus wronged me
terribly. I was the former wife of that faithless man; one so callously cast me
aside in favour of that woman because of my inability to give him an offspring.
His cold and cruel ways drove me in the end to suicide where I am now condemned
to roam the Earth and suffer this vile existence for all eternity. He happens
to be away for a long time, and I used this opportunity to affect my revenge on
him. She was blameless yes, but …” The phantom appeared for a moment or two truly
remorseful but then quickly rebounded and again glowered (looked daggers). “As
you have interceded, there remains little for me to do now. Unfortunately I
cannot depart without that thing I left behind me in my hurry. I know you have
it, and so I demand you return the item that rightfully belongs to me."
Endre Bjorn showed
her the rope, "Is this the thing you mean? I’m sorry for what has happened
to you. But why exact revenge on an innocent being? Your grievance is with your
husband not her. I fear if I were to give it back to you may once I’m gone try
again to snuff out an innocent life. And
that I cannot be party to."
With these
words he wound the rope around his arm and said: "Now be off with
you!"
The ghost in
her desperation now grew furious. Her face turned greenish-black, her hair fell
in wild disorder down her neck, her eyes grew bloodshot, and her tongue hung
far out of her mouth. She stretched forth both hands and tried to seize Endre,
but he struck out at her with his clenched fist.
Ghoul fought back fiercely and at one instance her long razor-sharp talons (fingernails like pincers) succeeded in inflicting a deep cut right through the cloth in Endre’s arm and from the deep slash oozed blood which stained his sleeve crimson. Endre did not wince (flinch, recoil) instead, he cooly, dipped his finger at the wound and flecked (splattered) those few drops of blood targeting her face and, since the ghosts cannot endure human blood, with a shrilling hiss she ceased her attack, jumped back (moved off) a few paces to safe distance. Her fury unleashed, growling she next hurled threats and vile abuses at him. Fortunately, just then, announcing the daybreak, the cock in the village had begun to crow. Then the ghost let out an ear deafening shrill cry and disappeared before the first rays of the morning sun hit her.
In the meantime,
the farmer-folk of the village having been apprised of the happenings, had
rushed forth to thank Endre Bjorn. It seems that after he had left the woman,
her husband had unexpectedly come home early and despite her effort to conceal
it, recognizing her still lingering, traumatized state, had asked to learn the reason
for it. Subsequently, for the first time
ever, he had learned of her long-suffering ordeal and, what had transpired that
very night. Her husband and the busybody neighbours, hence, had set out
together in haste to intercept and (forgiving his, albeit unintentional, impropriety)
thank the stranger for thwarting the evil ghost’s design.
When they came
upon Endre, he was still beating the air with his fists and talking wildly. So
they called out to him and he told them what had taken place. The rope could
still be seen on his blood drenched arm; yet it had grown fast to it and
surrounded it in the shape of a red ring of flesh.
Later that
morning, dismissing all the fuss, and refusing any reward, Endre, anxious to
resume his journey, quietly packed his belongings, then swung himself into his
saddle and galloped into distance.
His heart
was at peace, knowing that now that things had come to light, the husband and
the villagers would effectively deal with the pesky, evil ghoul, if she dared, to
ever try harming the innocent young woman again.
The End