INTREPID HAGEN RESCUES THE RAVEN PRINCE ARATHORN
There was
once a handsome, brave, strapping young man named Hagen, of about nineteen
years of age, with long blond hair and brilliant blue eyes like the sky on a
clear day. He knew how to read and write, as his retired scholar father had
taken pains to educate him at home; meanwhile, his mother the healer, had
passed on to him her knowledge about the traditional herbal medicines. Hagen
always had a wild imagination and since childhood he’d read copious (abundant,
profuse) fantasy books; he was additionally interested in anything pertaining
to supernatural and rather enjoyed dabbling in old sorts of magic.
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Hagen unfortunately lost his parents to fever about four years ago and since he had no other relatives, he continued to live alone in the wooden cabin, halfway down the mountain that had its summit permanently shrouded in snow and ice. Hagen was a resourceful young man who made a pretty good living by hunting and foraging in the woods for rare medicinal herbs and roots, then selling these pelts (furs) and the dried herbs at the nearby town.
It so
happened that one ordinary day at dusk a traveller cloaked in black, just
happened to be passing through the mountain; fortuitously, his path crossed Hagen’s,
who’d spent the day collecting specific herbs and rare medicinal roots, which
filled the bucket on his back to the brim.
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The traveller who’d introduced himself as Adelram (meaning, dark and noble), professed that he was actually a spiritualist (choosing not to say a sorcerer) on his way to the Ingolf Temple; unfortunately, he’d temporarily lost his way. Ingolf Temple was a place of great interest to Hagen as he’d once heard his father mention it to his mother, with great reverence. When Hagen later inquired about it, suspecting that his father might have once been a member of that sect or something else, his father had drawn a long face, then in a stern voice he’d vehemently denied knowing anything about it, and furthermore, irritably had admonished (rebuked) his son to never mention that name Ingolf, ever again. Hagen could not let it go however, and after pestering his mother, she’d secretly imparted to him the only fact she knew, that this was a secret sect that was very exclusive, and its location was quite mysterious. Now chancing on this spiritualist who was on his way to that very temple, well, Hagen could not simply let him go; not without extracting further information from him.
What Hagen
did not know however, was that the sorcerer had been actively searching for Hagen’s
father, for no one had ever belong to that sect and got to leave it, the way
Hagen’s father had done. As it had just then begun to rain, and from the look
of things, the rising wind herding the flotilla of clouds in the sky, the
downpours would be upon them soon, Adelram, before they were drenched, readily
accepted the invitation to spend the night in a warm dry place. Along the way Adelram
had truthfully confessed to Hagen that his bones were quite weary from his lengthy
travels anyway, and that his stomach gnawed as he’d forgotten to eat past two
days. He would resume his journey the subsequent day, or when the rain had let
up, with renewed vigour after a good night’s rest. What could be better than
that?
Once at the
wood cabin however, Adelram had learned that both Hagen’s parents had passed
away; negating the need to fulfill his secret assignment. Meanwhile, Hagen’s blissful
ignorance about his father’s past, had saved his life.
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After repast, the two comfortably seated by the hearth (fireplace) they had sincerely conversed delving into many topics, and in a very short time, Adelram become quite fond of the youth; furthermore, he was impressed with Hagen’s brilliance of mind and good heart.
Adelram at
one point, as a matter-of-factly, feigning mild interest, asked to see Hagen’s
right palm, and readily been given access to it, he studied the lines for a
long while, secretly reading much more, as he was also a seir (diviner,
clairvoyant, psychic). Subsequently, he knitted his brows, and then pinning (burrowing)
his eyes into Hagen’s, he studied the boy’s subconscious mind. In the end, Adelram, knowing what he knew,
swiftly decided to impart some of his knowledge of the (sacred scrolls) mystic
arts to this trusting, likeable youth, Hagen; therefore, providing him with slant
chance to overcome future catastrophe, and perhaps even save his life. The
outcome and how he fared (managed) the danger, however, would still depend on Hagen’s
future competence (aptitude, skill).
Adelram had stayed
with Hagen for several more days during which time he’d imparted on (taught
him) Hagen, a good measure of the arts, with the result that the young man
became an expert (proficient) in most spells and charms. As Hagen continued to
show such promise Adelram, before his intended departure, took Hagen aside and
showed him an incantation (spell) that he'd carefully written down during the
night on a parchment, while Hagen had blissfully slept. It dealt with the
exorcism of specific type, supremely powerful demon-spirit and told Hagen to
set it aside for now, till one day, when in dire straits, he might make good use
of it. Adelram then holding out the second parchment, said, “My dear boy, here's
several more effective spells (hexes) which I’ve written down for your eyes
only; these incantations will exorcise (banish, eliminate) most evil spirits; guard
it well, and it will always provide you with a good source of income. You’ll
never lack for dosh (cash, bread) and in time it may even provide you with a beautiful
wife.”
Hagen
gratefully accepted the gift.
Time passed
and as Hagen practiced the mystic arts, word of his competence spread and as
he’d prospered, he took up residence in the nearby small village. He conducted
his business of mysticism, divinations, exorcisms and dispensed herbal remedies,
from his current modest dwelling at the edge of the village. As he became
renown far and wide, Hagen’s gate was thronged with folk bearing many gits to
solicit his help.
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| 04- SEDIT |
Then one day a haughty (arrogant) merchant (who had prospered from selling arms and quality farm equipment) named Sedit, called on Hagen and in private consultation told Hagen that he was terribly worried about his precious younger daughter Botilda, worst still, he feared his daughter’s life might be in dire peril from an evil spirit or a ghost. He offered Hagen rich rewards if he would go and see her. Hearing that it was a case of life and death, Hagen consented to help and, forgoing any pre-payment for his trouble, set out immediately with Sedit to reach his residence. They travelled for several days, for the place was quite far. Eventually one late afternoon they arrived at this remote locale and presently came to Sedit’s house perched on a hilltop, which proved to be a magnificent mansion, built like a fortress. Entering it, Hagen was conducted to where Botilda was sleeping behind a gauze curtain; and when her maids hung up the curtain, he saw that though she was barely sixteen, her features were ravaged as if by a very long illness.
As Hagen
drew closer to examine her, the girl suddenly opened her eyes and smiled.
“Here comes
a good physician!” Botilda said in a hushed voice.
The whole
family was delighted, for up till then, she had remained as if in a coma, not
uttering a single sound, for several days.
After his
brief examination, Hagen left the girl’s chamber and went to the study where
Sedit was, to acquire more specifics about her prior symptoms; consequently, Hagen
learned from Sedit, that in broad daylight servants had observed, more than
once, a young man going into Botilda’s bed. At each attempt to catch him
however, the young man had vanished, only to reappear soon after. Sedit
therefore had deduced (assumed) that he must be an avenging evil spirit or a ghost.
“If he is a
ghost,” remarked Hagen, “I can easily rid you of him. But if he is a powerful demon,
I shall be powerless to help.”
“No, of that
I’m certain, he is not!” exclaimed Sedit with a wry smile. Sedit had then grumbled
something under his breath, then added in hushed voice, “He wouldn’t dare
trespass on my …!” Then staying his tongue, he’d furtively looked to ascertain
Hagen had not caught (heard) the careless lingo (speech, utterance, mumble).
Having dispensed
written charms to some of the attending servants, those around the patient, Hagen
retired for the night, though sleep averted him. At stroke of midnight, a
well-dressed young man entered his room, and Hagen, taking him to be some
relative of the host, rose from his couch and ask to learn the stranger’s name.
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“I am the Raven Prince Arathorn, my physical form, spellbound by the silver chains, is held captive (imprisoned) in the very dungeon below,” was the disconsolate (melancholy, sad) reply. “Do not underestimate that villain Sedit, he is in truth, a powerful panther demon. His supposed wife Ellisif and her daughters Botilda and Freya, are his human captives. Sedit, five years ago brutally murdered her husband and took her for himself. But he had, same time also, kidnapped her two young girls …. Let’s just say he has sinister plans for them both when they become full adult. Before my capture, I, with my youthful exuberance, wanting to see the world, had left the safe heaven of my father’s kingdom, in search of adventure. Passing through this region, I happened to see, Botilda, the young lady you’ve been asked to cure (restore to health), carefree and gathering wildflowers at the edge of the forest and felt instantly drawn to her; nevertheless, I flew on by.” Arathorn, dropping his head, fell silent for a moment, recalling in his mind’s eye, the delightfully captivating, serene scene back then, a time which seemed a lifetime ago.
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He cleared his throat and then resumed his say, “But then, since I could not get her out of my mind, I flew back sometime later, to glimpse her one more time. I came upon the horrific scene. I fought him but he was too powerful and in the and, I too was taken captive by this loathsome (immoral, vicious), malignant demon. Because I have taken fancy to Botilda, I managed to release my spirit from my body, and aptly disguised, through telepathic (telekinetic) projections, akin now, from time to time, I confess that I had visited her, though chiefly to console her and try to give her hope, scant hope that there was, till you happened to come along.”
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| 07- BOTILDA IN CAREFREE TIMES |
Arathorn allowed Hagen to see him as he truly was, bound by chains in the dungeon; before shifting back to less dramatic (pitiable) form. Arathorn pensively bit the corner of his lip and shook his head; thenceforth, he in serious tone, cautioned Hagen: “Do not let your guard down, not for a second; he has sought you out for some malevolent motive. You are a pray, not his salvation. I approached you with this warning, because I can sense that you are a decent mortal being. And perhaps we can find some apt resolution to this dilemma; possibly we can in some way help each other, as you are true of heart and for this reason, I decided to trust you. I shall also relay to you that Botilda’s elder sister Freya, who shall be eighteen years old in seven day’s time, is even more beautiful than my beloved. But I assure you, I only have eyes for Botilda; and, till present our relationship has only been platonic, I have not done anything improper, and I am not certainly responsible for her ailment. While I have respected and even guarded their virtue, there is a mysterious force that is perpetuated by Sedit, poised to, in not to distant future, inflict harm on them both. Temporarily, doing my best to protect them, I deliberately caused mayhem and fright to deter his dastardly aim. But my vitality is waning (diminishing) and the bluff will only work so far; I cannot shapeshift, I cannot use my innate powers, I am rendered utterly helpless and at his mercy. But I care not for my welfare; my chief worries are of the innocent two; what will become of them when I’m gone? Who will save them then?”
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Hagen’s face as he’d listened, had revealed no emotion at all, though inwardly he’d seethed in fury. His heart was beset with dismay by all these shocking revelations and his righteous sense demanded for him to at once lash out at Sedit, to attack and destroy this demon. He wanted nothing better than to rescue the innocent captives, to release the raven prince, only, he did not know how to go about it.
As if
reading (anticipating) what was on his mind, Prince Arathorn suddenly said, “We
need a good plan, an apt strategy before we go up against him; and conceivably,
a powerful incantation, one that would paralyse (incapacitate) him, if not, rob
him of his powers, long enough to enable us to terminate him. But I know no
such spell; do you?”
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Suddenly, the very incantation Adelram had gifted to him, came to Hagen’s mind and, after an elated chortle (snigger), he happily exclaimed: “Yes, indeed; I happened to have the very thing!” After that, he briefly told Raven Prince Arathorn about Adelram and his imparted secret incantation, Hagen was certain it would be the key (fundamental armament) solution.
Subsequently,
both Hagen and Arathorn wracked their brains till they devised a concrete plan;
mindful that they would only get this one chance to best the demon. They needed
the help of one other willing participant, however, one the demon would not
suspect and preferably the very one the demon would overlook. There was only
one person, that it could be…
Next day before
noon, Hagen approached Sedit and told him that after the night’s deliberation,
he’d arrived at a probable solution; but then he hesitated (stalled), and after
exhaling a deep breath, he stated that he would do this on one condition however,
as he would face certain peril, in leu of payment for his services, he wished that Sedit would consent to wed him to his
elder daughter Freya.
Sedit looked
as though he would explode, but he quickly swallowed his rage, and forcing a
smile to his lips, a smile that never reached his cold eyes, he tautly ejected,
I’ll need some time to consider this. Then as if in afterthought, he nodded in
agreement, “Never mind; I agree.”
Weary of
deception and fearing Sedit might recant the nuptial agreement once Botilda was
entirely cured (and supposedly safe), Hagen asked for an added assurance from Sedit’s
wife Ellisif who happened to just then came out from the inner chambers. Ellisif, having heard of their accord, and hope
springing in her heart, she’d advanced towards Hagen to greet him and state
also her ready pledge.
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“These suspicions are quite unworthy of you, sir!” Ellisif, nevertheless, criticized Hagen, trying not to appear too eager. My husband’s word is law in this household, however, since you ask for guarantee, would this suffice?” Ellisif then, with pretend indignation, (handed over) gave him Freya’s gold hairpin. As Hagen received the hairpin, he discretely that same moment had slipped into her pocket a written note. She’d sensed this and after her furtive look at her husband, convinced he’d not noticed this breach, Ellisif then sharply looked at Hagen, to silently berate him for his audacity, for such dangerous and improper conduct, but seeing the urgent warning in Hagen’s eyes, an understanding dawning on her, she shut her mouth and said nothing more.
Subsequently,
Hagen had spent most of the day making certain preparations. Shortly after
dusk, he then summoned the whole household and chanted incantations to exorcise
the ghost. Hagen burned some sage and did some smudging, which was a typical purifying
ritual. After re-examining the sick girl Botilda, he asked for water to
sprinkle on the curtain.
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| 11-FREYA |
To his utter delight it was the elder sister who swiftly brought him a bowl, stealing glances at him as she came and went. Hagen felt captivated by her grace and beauty but pretended not to notice her. Meanwhile, Botilda had for some reason, a relapse, and now was moaning in her bed, but when he mumbled his incantations and then sprinkled holy water over her, this after he’d given her an herbal potion (chiefly to sooth her nerves but same time keep her alert and awake), she appeared subdued, and possibly cured. Hagen then left her side. She did not lose any consciousness and thereafter, had no episodes or irregularities during the rest of that night.
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The Raven Prince Arathorn, also as per agreed, did not manifest in Botilda’s chamber at all.
All seemingly
was quiet that afternoon; moreover, because of the spell Hagen had secretly
invoked, it had deterred the evil spirit, from possible trespass and rehash her
ailment. The job seemingly concluded, Hagen now prepared to take his leave, but
Sedit pressed him to stay for the night and would not take no for an answer. He
was promptly served a sumptuous feast at repast; Ellisif and Sedit entertained
Hagen as a most honoured guest, his host remaining with him till he retired to
his room for forty winks (sleep). Just as Hagen laid down to slumber (nap,
sleep), he heard an impatient knocking at the door and arose to find Freya
there. She furtively looked about then darted in.
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| 13-FREYA |
“My stepfather will propose that you stay on two additional nights, and he’ll tell you that the day after tomorrow, on the third night, we will be wed in private ceremony; but he has no intention of letting me to ever marry you; he is plotting instead, to murder you tomorrow night!” She gasped. “You must flee to safety… Please, leave under some pretext at dawn tomorrow, I can’t bear to see you perish, fly for your life!” This said in an urgent voice and turning around, she was gone. But Hagen had no intention of fleeing.
Following
morning Sedit looking terribly annoyed and grim, without knocking simply barged
into Hagen’s room and in furious tone informed Hagen of the sudden relapse in
his daughter’s condition at dawn and hence, demanded he examine her again. Hagen
suspected a cover-up for Sedit’s failed, flustered, dubious, evil attempts. Prior,
having anticipated this turn, (possibly of Sedit’s), Hagen had covertly put in
place, potent, strips with protection incantations. It must have worked; however,
this could not be repeated, for it was only a temporary solution. He needed to return to his home immediately and
study the parchment Adelram had gifted him. He would then return, armed with the
knowledge, to initiate the rest of the carefully devised plan.
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When Sedit had to leave midmorning that day, to oversee some business matter in town, and stated that he would be back before dusk, this gave Hagen the single chance, and borrowing one of their horses from the stables, on some pretext he left the mansion.
He galloped
the steed all the way and returning home in haste, he quickly fetched the
parchment. He read the incantation, committed it to memory, fetched the
necessary herbal concoction, fortunately for him already in liquid form, in a
blue small bottle, this secured in his inner pocket, he then once more mounting
the steed, galloped back, mount and rider drenched in perspiration, to arrive in
nick of time at Sedit’s mansion. He was back late afternoon, just before Sedit’s
posh carriage had pulled to a stop at the (well guarded) iron gates.
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At repast that night, goblet filled with his choice wine, Sedit, commanding attention, made a toast to Hagen specifically, for completely curing Botilda, and then again for his upcoming nuptial to Freya. What he did not know however, was that the wine had been infused with the specific incantation laced concoction. As Sedit drunk to his black heart’s content, smiling with sinister glee, his thoughts engaged with enumerating his secret vile plan that late night, he did not pay too much attention, that just then his true form was revealed to all, though only for a spell; and, if anyone had blinked, they would have missed it.
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Then the transformation began: Sedit’s blazing eyes dimmed, gradually his senses had dulled and his physique on cellular level shifted; bit by bit (increasingly), without him knowing it, he had lost his omnipotent power to then slowly become just a mere mortal being. When the realization had set in, he had only mere seconds to reverse the damage, to alter the lasting effects. This was the most crucial moment, the only window of opportunity, when he was utterly vulnerable as a living, breathing mortal being. There had been a vague reference to this in the parchment; but even Adelram could not be certain of it. Hagen had, nevertheless, factored this variance into the plan, deciding to chance it. At that critical juncture, Sedit’s timid (brow-beaten) wife Ellisif, who had suffered so terribly at his hand all these years, still bereft (mourning, grieving) of her beloved husband’s murder, and now Sedit was still planning far worse for her beloved children, well, something had snapped in her.
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Ellisif suddenly had stood up, turned, and akin a tigress she plunged the long dagger’s blade (a stiletto) straight into Sedit’s transformed (altered) completely human heart. Even though the warm red blood (not black blood) rapidly spread, soaking his tunic in crimson, he still overcoming this shock, had enough predatory vigour (strength) in him that, before anyone could intercede (put a stop to it), his hand had precipitously reached out and fiercely grabbing Ellisif by the keck, crushed the bone. In a blink of an eye, both Sedit and Ellisif had expired instantaneously, (toppling) collapsing lifeless, on the floor. The malevolent devil had met his end, but unfortunately, he’d managed to claim one more innocent victim, even at the very end.
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Now the moment the Devil had expired, so had ceased (stopped) the spell that had bound the Raven Prince in chains (manacles, cuffs, fetters). Arathorn’s power suddenly restored, he ripped the shackles (restraints) as if they were paper; once freed, his fists next smashed open the locked iron doors and he hastened (bolted) up the stairs.
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~
Long after
the funeral of Ellisif and the proper mourning period, the two surviving
daughters in a simple ceremony had joyfully married to their beloveds. As life
goes on, eventually two sisters parted company, and each at different milieu (locale,
background, environment) resumed rest of their fulfilling existence.
Raven Prince
Arathorn flew, with his human wife Botilda held tight in his arms, and returning
home in no time at all, as he was the sole heir (successor), reclaim his
rightful place in that kingdom.
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Botilda lived happily with the then crowned king, as his queen in this surreal, most fantastic world; soon after, they were blessed with two healthy boys and lived contentedly to ripe old age.
Hagen also
lived blissfully for many years with Freya, overcoming many challenges and then
passing on their knowledge to three beautiful children when they grew up, two
boys and one girl. Hagen and Freya’s love never diminished throughout their
ordeals in the mortal realm, not even when they were old, feeble and their hair
turned completely white, as they were always surrounded by caring friends, good
neighbours, and the incessant (continuous) joy and laughter of children and many
grandchildren (permeating the air).
The End
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